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Conclusion and evaluation

How to write the Conclusion and Evaluation of the IB Biology IA: answer the research question from the data, compare with published science, and rank weaknesses by their impact.

  • IB Biology
  • Internal assessment
  • SL and HL

15 min readLast reviewed 14 Oct 2026

Conclusion and Evaluation are the third and fourth criteria of the scientific investigation, worth 12 of the 24 marks between them. The conclusion answers the research question from the processed data and places the answer in its scientific context. The evaluation judges how far the method can be trusted: which weaknesses and limitations affected the results, how much, and what would be done to reduce them.

Both sections depend on the analysis. A conclusion can only be as strong as the processed data and uncertainties behind it, and an evaluation can only be specific if the data show where the method struggled. The examples continue the sample investigation of temperature and catalase activity in potato tuber (Solanum tuberosum), using the student's sample results from "Data analysis".

What the Conclusion criterion rewards

The descriptors ask whether the conclusion is relevant to the research question, how well it is supported by the analysis, and how well it is compared with accepted science.

Aspect

Band 1–2

Band 3–4

Band 5–6

The conclusion

Stated; relevant to the question but not supported by the analysis

Described; relevant but not fully consistent with the analysis

Justified; relevant and fully consistent with the analysis, including its uncertainties

Scientific context

Compared only superficially with accepted science

Some relevant comparison with accepted science

Justified through relevant comparison with accepted scientific context

"Fully consistent with the analysis" means that the conclusion claims no more than the data show. If the error bars of two levels overlap and a t-test finds no significant difference, a conclusion that names one of them as the optimum is not consistent with the analysis. "Accepted scientific context" means published theory and published values, from papers, textbooks or reliable databases, cited in the text.

Writing the conclusion

Answering the research question

The conclusion opens by answering the research question directly, using the processed data. It gives the trend in words, quotes the key values with units, and refers to the uncertainties and the results of any statistical test. It stays within the range of the independent variable that was tested.

  1. Answer the question in one or two sentences: the direction and shape of the relationship.

  2. Support it with processed data: means, percentage changes, the position of a maximum, the gradient or the test result.

  3. State how certain it is: overlapping error bars, the size of the standard deviations, and whether differences are significant.

  4. Explain it with theory: the biological mechanism that accounts for the trend.

  5. Compare it with accepted science: does the result match published values and the expected pattern? If not, suggest a reason.

  6. Say how far the hypothesis is supported, without claiming proof.

Using a curve of best fit to locate a value

Where the research question asks for a particular value (an optimum, an isotonic point, a threshold), a curve or line of best fit gives a better estimate than the single highest mean, because it uses all the data. The graph of the catalase means shows a quadratic curve of best fit through the seven points.

152025303540455055606502468101214161820Temperature / °CRate / cm³ min⁻¹35 °C45 °C17.4Curve maximum ≈ 38 °C
  • Quadratic curve of best fit, R² = 0.95
A student's sample means for catalase in potato with a quadratic curve of best fit. The curve peaks near 38 °C; the t-tests place the optimum between 35 °C and 45 °C (dashed lines).

The highest mean is at 40 °C, the curve of best fit has its maximum near 38 °C, and the t-tests show that 40 °C is significantly faster than 35 °C but not significantly different from 45 °C. All three point to an optimum in the range 35–45 °C, which is the conclusion the data support. A quadratic curve is only an approximation of an enzyme's temperature curve, which usually falls more steeply above the optimum than it rises below it, so its maximum is an estimate.

Common mistake

Stating a precise optimum the data cannot support, such as "the optimum temperature of potato catalase is 40 °C". The levels tested were 5 °C apart and the 40 °C and 45 °C means are not significantly different. Give the range the analysis supports: "the optimum lies between 35 °C and 45 °C, most likely close to 40 °C".

Comparing with accepted science

The comparison has two parts. The first is theory: does the shape of the results match the accepted model (for enzymes, the rise from increasing collision frequency and the fall from denaturation)? The second is published values: is the measured value similar to values reported by others for the same system? Where the result differs from published values, the difference is explained, for example by differences in the source of the enzyme, the substrate concentration or the time the enzyme spent at each temperature.

Worked example

Two students wrote these conclusions for the catalase investigation. Evaluate each against the Conclusion criterion.

Conclusion A. "The results show that temperature affects catalase. The rate went up and then went down. This proves my hypothesis that enzymes have an optimum temperature and are denatured at high temperatures."

Conclusion B. "The rate of oxygen release by potato catalase increased from a mean of 8.70 cm³ min⁻¹ at 20 °C to 17.40 cm³ min⁻¹ at 40 °C, then decreased by 78.7% to 3.70 cm³ min⁻¹ at 60 °C. The rate at 40 °C was significantly higher than at 35 °C (t = 2.51, p < 0.05), but not significantly different from the rate at 45 °C (t = 2.29, p > 0.05), and a quadratic curve of best fit (R² = 0.95) has its maximum near 38 °C. The data therefore support an optimum between 35 °C and 45 °C. The rise below the optimum is explained by the greater kinetic energy of enzyme and substrate molecules, which increases the frequency of successful collisions; the steep fall above 45 °C is consistent with denaturation, as bonds holding the tertiary structure break and the active site changes shape. This range agrees with the optimum of about 40 °C reported for crude potato catalase (Taha, 2016). The hypothesis is supported within the range tested."

Show the evaluation
  • Conclusion A answers the question only in general terms, quotes no data, ignores the uncertainty and the statistics, and makes no comparison with published values. "Proves" overstates what any data set can show. It fits the lowest band: a conclusion is stated but not supported by the analysis.

  • Conclusion B answers the research question with processed values and units, includes the test results and limits the claim to what they support (a range, not a single value). It explains the trend with theory, compares the result with a cited published value and states how far the hypothesis is supported. It is justified and fully consistent with the analysis, which fits the top band.

Exam tip

Moderators reward a conclusion whose claims can each be traced back to a number in the analysis. A useful test is to underline every claim in your conclusion and check that a value, a graph or a statistical result in the data analysis supports it.

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Walk-through of the Conclusion criterion of the 2025 IB Biology internal assessment: answering the research question and comparing with scientific context.

What the Evaluation criterion rewards

The evaluation is assessed on how specific the weaknesses and limitations are, how well their effect on the results is judged, and how realistic and relevant the improvements are.

Aspect

Band 1–2

Band 3–4

Band 5–6

Weaknesses and limitations

Generic ones stated ("human error", "more repeats")

Specific methodological weaknesses or limitations described

The relative impact of specific weaknesses or limitations on the results explained

Improvements

Realistic improvements stated

Realistic improvements relevant to the weaknesses described

Realistic and relevant improvements explained

"Relative impact" is the key phrase of the top band. It means judging which weaknesses mattered most to the conclusion and which mattered little, and saying in which direction each one pushed the results. A list of every possible problem, all treated as equally important, does not reach it.

Weaknesses and limitations

Types of error

A weakness is a problem with how the method was carried out that made the data less accurate or less precise. A limitation is a restriction on how far the conclusion can be applied, even if the method worked well: the range tested, the number of samples, the use of one tuber, or the fact that a laboratory extract may not behave like the enzyme inside living cells. Weaknesses usually cause one of two kinds of error.

Definition

Random error: unpredictable variation in measurements that scatters repeated values on either side of the true value; it reduces precision and its effect on a mean is reduced by taking more repeats.

Random errors come from natural variation in biological material, small differences in timing or reading a scale, and fluctuations in conditions. They show up as spread in the repeats, so their size can be measured with the standard deviation. They make a trend harder to see and make differences between levels less likely to be significant.

Two graphs of rate against temperature, each with a solid true curve. Left, systematic error: a dashed measured curve lies below the true curve at every point, with an arrow at the peak. Right, random error: points scatter above and below the true curve.Two graphs of rate against temperature, each with a solid true curve. Left, systematic error: a dashed measured curve lies below the true curve at every point, with an arrow at the peak. Right, random error: points scatter above and below the true curve.
A systematic error shifts every value the same way, so the trend and the position of the optimum survive; random error scatters values, blurring the trend.

Definition

Systematic error: an error that shifts every measurement in the same direction by a similar amount or proportion, caused by a fault in the instrument or method; it reduces accuracy and is not reduced by repeating the measurement.

Systematic errors include a gas leak at the bung (every volume too low), a thermometer that reads 2 °C high (every temperature wrong in the same direction), or a balance that is not zeroed. Repeats do not show them, because every repeat is affected in the same way. Their effect on the conclusion depends on the research question: a leak that lowers every volume by a similar proportion leaves the shape of the curve and the position of the optimum unchanged, but would matter if the aim were to measure the true rate. This links to the meanings of accuracy (closeness to the true value) and precision (closeness of repeats to each other).

Validity and reliability

Definition

Validity: the extent to which an investigation measures what it sets out to measure, so that its conclusion about the effect of the independent variable on the dependent variable can be trusted.

A method is valid when the dependent variable truly reflects the quantity in the research question and the controlled variables really are controlled. Measuring oxygen released in 60 s is a valid measure of the rate of catalase activity only if almost all the oxygen reaches the syringe and the temperature of the mixture is the set temperature. Reliability is about consistency: repeated measurements under the same conditions give similar results. A strong evaluation discusses both validity and reliability.

Tip

A quick way to find weaknesses is to look at your data first. Large error bars, anomalous results, a curve that does not match the theory, or values close to the instrument uncertainty each point to a specific problem in the method.

Judging the relative impact of weaknesses

For each weakness, the evaluation explains what it was, which data it affected and how (direction and size), and how much it matters to the conclusion. The table applies this to the catalase investigation, ranked from the greatest to the smallest impact on the conclusion about the optimum.

Weakness or limitation

Evidence and effect on the results

Impact on the conclusion

Improvement

Variation in catalase between discs (random error)

SD rose from 0.57 at 20 °C to 1.68 cm³ min⁻¹ at 50 °C; error bars at 40 and 45 °C overlap

High: the main reason the optimum cannot be narrowed below 35–45 °C

Use a filtered potato extract (homogenised in buffer) so every trial has the same enzyme concentration; increase to 10 repeats

Spacing of temperatures (limitation)

5 °C steps around the optimum; the true optimum could lie anywhere between 35 and 45 °C

High: limits how precisely the optimum can be located

Repeat with 2 °C steps from 34 to 46 °C

Denaturation during the 60 s collection at 50 and 60 °C (weakness)

The rate falls during the minute, so the volume is an average of a declining rate; may explain the large SD at 50 °C

Moderate: affects the shape above the optimum, not its position

Measure the initial rate over the first 15 s with a pressure sensor and data logger

Oxygen lost before the bung is inserted and dissolved in the solution (systematic error)

Every volume slightly too low, more at high rates

Low: lowers all values in a similar proportion; the optimum is unchanged

Hold the discs in a small tube inside the sealed flask and tip them in after sealing

One potato tuber (limitation)

Results apply to one tuber of one variety

Low for the trend; limits how far the result applies to potato catalase in general

Repeat with tubers of several varieties and ages

This ranking is the core of a top-band evaluation. The two highest-impact weaknesses both limit how precisely the optimum can be located, which is the aim of the research question. The systematic loss of oxygen has little effect on the conclusion, because it affects all temperatures in the same way and so does not move the optimum.

Common mistake

Writing "human error" or "the results could be inaccurate" as a weakness. These phrases name no specific step of the method and no effect on the data, so they earn very little. Name the step (inserting the bung after adding the discs), the effect (oxygen escapes, so volumes are too low) and the size (larger at the faster rates near 40 °C).

Improvements and extensions

An improvement is a realistic change to the method that reduces a specific weakness. It is described precisely enough to carry out, and the evaluation explains how it would reduce the weakness. "Use better equipment" or "be more careful" are not improvements. "Measure oxygen with a pressure sensor connected to a data logger, so the initial rate over the first 15 s can be calculated from the gradient before significant denaturation occurs" is.

Improvements must be realistic for a school laboratory and must match a weakness that has been identified. An improvement with no matching weakness, or a weakness with no improvement, leaves the evaluation incomplete.

An extension is a further investigation that follows from the conclusion and widens it. Examples for the catalase investigation are measuring the effect of the time spent at 50 °C before adding substrate (to study the rate of denaturation), repeating the temperature series at a different pH, or comparing the optimum of catalase from potato with that from another tissue such as liver or yeast. Extensions are optional, and the descriptors reward improvements more than extensions, so they are kept short.

Worked example

Two students wrote these evaluation paragraphs about the same weakness. Compare them against the Evaluation criterion.

Paragraph A. "There may have been some errors in the experiment because of human error and the potato discs might not all have been the same. To improve the experiment I would do more repeats and be more careful."

Paragraph B. "The main weakness was variation in the amount of catalase between discs. Although all discs were cut to the same size from one tuber, they differed in how many cells were damaged at the cut surface, and so in how much catalase was in contact with the substrate. This random error is shown by the standard deviations, which rose to 1.68 cm³ min⁻¹ at 50 °C, and by the overlap of the 40 °C and 45 °C error bars. It had the largest effect on the conclusion, because it is the reason the optimum could only be placed between 35 °C and 45 °C. Replacing the discs with a filtered potato extract, prepared by blending 50 g of potato in 100 cm³ of pH 7 buffer, would give the same concentration of catalase in every trial and so reduce the spread; increasing the repeats from five to ten would further reduce the standard error of each mean."

Show the comparison
  • Paragraph A names a weakness only in general terms ("human error", "might not all have been the same"), gives no evidence from the data, says nothing about the effect on the results and offers generic improvements. It reaches the lowest band.

  • Paragraph B names a specific weakness and its cause, uses the data (standard deviations, overlapping error bars) as evidence, explains its effect and judges its relative impact on the conclusion. The improvement is realistic, described precisely enough to carry out and explained in terms of the weakness it reduces. It reaches the top band.

Exam tip

Moderators reward an evaluation that discusses two or three weaknesses in depth, ranked by their impact, more than a long list of minor problems. Choose the weaknesses that the data show most clearly and that affect the answer to the research question.

Every scientific conclusion carries uncertainty, and published papers include a discussion of the limitations of the method for the same reason as the IA. Identifying how a method could mislead is part of how scientific knowledge becomes more reliable over time.

A final pre-submission checklist

The checklist covers the points that most often cost marks. Work through it with the final report, not the draft.

Research design

  • To do:

    The research question names the independent variable with its range, the dependent variable with how it is measured, and the organism by its scientific name.

  • To do:

    The background theory explains why the two variables should be related, with citations.

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    Every controlled variable has its value, how it was controlled and why it matters.

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    The method is in numbered steps, with every quantity and instrument uncertainty, and could be repeated by someone else.

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    Range, increments and repeats are justified; preliminary trials are described.

  • To do:

    Safety, ethical and environmental issues are specific to the method.

Data analysis

  • To do:

    Raw data tables include all levels and repeats, with units and uncertainties in the headings and consistent decimal places.

  • To do:

    There is one sample calculation for each type of processing.

  • To do:

    Graphs have titles, labelled axes with units, error bars and a statement of what the error bars show.

  • To do:

    Any statistical test has its null hypothesis, test value, critical value or p-value and a correct interpretation.

Conclusion and evaluation

  • To do:

    The conclusion answers the research question with processed values and units, and claims no more than the uncertainties and statistics allow.

  • To do:

    The results are explained with theory and compared with cited published values.

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    Weaknesses are specific, supported by the data, and ranked by their impact on the conclusion.

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    Each weakness has a realistic, precisely described improvement.

The whole report

  • To do:

    The report is no longer than 3,000 words, with the word count stated.

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    Every source, image, database and any AI tool used is cited; any collaboration is acknowledged.

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    Every table and graph is numbered and referred to in the text.

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    Nothing that earns marks is in an appendix.

Tip

Improve your notes. Take the conclusion and evaluation from a practical you have already written up and rewrite them using the six steps for a conclusion and a table of weaknesses ranked by impact. Link the theory to the relevant subtopic, for example enzyme denaturation in C1.1 or water potential in D2.3.

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